Wikipedia:Peer review/Justin Bieber/archive2

Justin Bieber

Previous peer review

I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to take it to FAC eventually. Comments on prose and possible academic/book sources would be appreciated. Thanks, NRP (talk) 18:59, 1 November 2026 (UTC)

Not-cheesewhisk3rs

Hello. I'd like to review this, but probably won't be able to look through everything. Is there any part of it you particularly want prose comments for? --not-cheesewhisk3rs ≽^•⩊•^≼ ∫ (pester) 18:17, 2 November 2026 (UTC)

Any suggestions for how to make the prose more engaging/more comparable to musician FAs would be appreciated! Just anything that sticks out to you in a read ... I've been working on this article for a while now so I'm sure there's stuff I'm missing. I also think the achievements section could be trimmed more, so if you have any suggestions for that I'd appreciate that as well. NRP (talk) 18:55, 2 November 2026 (UTC)

I haven't done any musician FAC reviews, but I'll compare with musician FAs then get back to you with comments. --not-cheesewhisk3rs ≽^•⩊•^≼ ∫ (pester) 20:18, 2 November 2026 (UTC)